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第一段：描述段落 2-3句
- 漫画适用，文字材料可以从第二段开始
- 第1句：对象1(人) 位置动作/话语
- 第2句：对象2(人) 动作/话语 or 事物特征
- 第3句：文字说明 or 象征意义
第二段：论证段落--- “主题重要性” 4句
- 第1句：主题词(2选1)
- 第2句：意义分析(16个smile bar短语)
- 第3句：主题词(8个例子)
- 第4句：研究发现
- 8大话题(用smile bar跟上)
  - 1 创新 // 好处：节约劳动力、更多便利、提高效率 save/more/improve
  - 2 正面现象(爱心、社会责任感、奉献精神) // 营造好的氛围、带来温暖、获取信任和支持 build/bring/acquire/leave
  - 3 个人品质 // 获得前景、提高竞争力、从不好的状态中恢复过来，实现理想 acquire/improve/recover/realize
  - 4 传统文化(去年考过) // 提高民族自信、丰富生活、提高民族凝聚力 improve/enrich/build
  - 5 诚信 // 给别人留下好的印象、获得别人的信任和支持，营造好的社会环境 leave/acquire/build
  - 6 文明行为 // 同诚信
  - 7 压力/心理健康 // 提高效率、实现潜能、获得动力 improve/realize/acquire
  - 8 低碳经济/生活 // 降低资源消耗、减少二氧化碳的排放、可持续发展、可以为环保做贡献 lower/reduce/realize/more
第三段：个人评论 3句
- 第1句提出疑问
- 第2句提建议(3选1)
- 第3句展望未来

句型

第一段句型
- 第1句(固定)：As is shown above, 介词短语(位置) is/are 对象1 (定从)who is/are doing and saying/thinking "..."
- 介词短语
  - 介词9个方位
    - 前面 in front of X
    - 后面 behind X
    - 上面 on X
    - 旁边 beside X
    - 里面 in X
    - 中间 in the middle of X
    - 周围 around X
    - 在图片左边 at the left side of the pictrue
    - 在图片右边 at the right side of the pictrue
  - 参照物
    - table餐桌、desk书桌、sofa 沙发、chair 椅子、picture 图片
- 第2句(灵活)：Meanwhile, OR On the contrary, 2选1
  - 1、不同 there is/are 对象2 (定从)
    - who is/are doing and replying/imagining...
    - which 特征1 and 特征2
  - 2、相同 When时间状从，主干句
- 第3句(灵活)：2选1
  - 1、图片上有文字：The caption indicates,...
  - 2、图片下无文字：Simple as the picture is,the symbolic meaning is as deep as ocean.
第二段句型
- 第1句主题句(2选1)
  - 1、The purpose of this cartoon/excerpt is to show us that due(足够的) attention should be paid to the importance of 主题词(n/doing 短语)
  - 2、The cartoon has subtly(巧妙地) revealed a meaning/phenomenon 短语/that 同从
    - one should...
    - we should...
    - 2023年传统文化
      - A、advocating our traditional culture
      - B、we should advocate our traditional culture.
    - 2022年广泛学习
      - A、extensive learning
      - B、we should learn knowledge widely.
    - 2021年坚持-兴趣/爱好/梦想/热爱的事情
      - A、insisting on what we love
      - B、we should insist on our dreams.
    - 其它年份的题目和主题词文档在cctalk
- 第2句意义分析(16个smile bar短语)
  - First and foremost, from 主题词(n/doing), we can benefit a lot, such as A,B and C. A/B/C(doing短语用smile bar)
- 第3句例证分析(8个例子)
  - In addition, when it comes to(提到) the significance of 主题词, I can think of no better illustration than the following one(s): 例子.
  - 例子
    - 1、个人品质(用乔布斯举例)：广泛学习
      - Steve Jobs who can learn knowledge widely,spent his life on packaging the magic of computing into...
    - 2、正面现象(爱心、社会责任感、奉献精神)
      - On Chinese new-year` s eve a night for family reunion in 2020, more than 1200 medical workers across China were drafted to aid Wuhan with a high risk of being infected.
    - 3、个人品质/压力(苏炳添)
      - Su bingtian who 主题词, ran a 9.83s in the men`s 100m semifinal and became the first Asian man entering the 100m final of the Olympic games.
    - 4、文化融合/传统文化
      - Confucianism that was created by Confucius 2500 years ago, has had a far-reaching impact on the world and Chinese civilization.
    - 5、诚信-欺诈
      - The cherry-tree-chopping Washington who never lied to his father, built an image on integrity and won respect and support form his people.
    - 6、文明行动(列宁让路)
      - Lenin, a Russian communist politician, made way for a female worker carrying a basin of water and showed his great manners.
    - 7、亲子关系/孝顺(子路借米,孔子弟子)
      - Zi Lu is known as the most filial disciple of Confucius, travels over 100 miles to borrow rice from his relatives for his parents and spares no efforts(最大努力) to treat them with proper respect.
    - 8、低碳生活
      - The new-energy auto industry has been enjoying a rapid development due to the popularity of a low-carbon lifestyle.
- 第4句研究发现
  - Last but not least, the studies conducted by Harvard University have found that college students-those who 主题词 -- excel(领先) other students on a range of career and education achievement factors.(---系列职业和教育成就因素)
第三段句型
- 第1句提出疑问
  - What is the right attitude we should take toward this meanning/phenomenon/topic?
- 第2句应对措施(3选1)
  - (1)个人品质
    - The general public should be educated and guided to understand the importance of 主题词, which is essential to individual growth.
  - (2)正面现象/中性话题
    - The whole society ought to work out useful proposals to ensure this phenomenon will produce lasting(持续的) effect on the building of a healthy society.
  - (3)反面现象
    - It is necessary that related laws and regulations should be made to solve this urgent problem.
- 第3句展望未来
  - Only in this way, can we enjoy b bright future, can we realize ths prosperity and rejuvenation of China.

写作步骤

第一段
- 第一步：把图片转成汉语
  - 例如(两个对象都是人)
    - 1、一个父亲在沙发上/椅子上抽烟/看电视/说 ...
    - 2、另一个父亲和儿子一起学习
    - 3、文字说明 or 象征意义
  - 例如(对象1是人，对象2非人)
    - 1、小男孩在操场上面带微笑流着汗水的跑步，
    - 2、寓意，终点又是新起点
  - 例如(对象1和对象2是同一个，只是空间不同)，不会考
- 第二步：汉语--句型--英语
  - 例句(两个对象都是人)
    - 1、As is shown above, on a soft is a father who is smoking, watching a football game and saying, "Son,study hard quickly."
    - 2、On the contrary, there is another father who is studying with his son at 10 p.m..
    - 3、The caption indicates, "Examples are more important than requirements."
  - 例句(对象1是人，对象2非人)
    - 1、As is shown above, on the playground is a handsome boy who is running, smiling and sweating.
    - 2、The caption indicates, "The finishing line is also a starting line"
第二段

其它句子写法

例如：我累了，我不爬了
- 并列：I am tired and I don`t want to climb
- 主从
  - I am tired so I don`t want to climb.
  - I am so tired that I don`t want to climb. // 如此...以至于...
  - I don`t want to climb because I am tired.
考研、求职、出国、创业
- Taking the postgraduate exam/Pursuing a Master degree/Continuing to study
- looking for a job/Hunting...
- going abroad
- Running a company/Start a business/Becoming a boss
smile bar
- 1.s 1个
  - saving time/money/labor greatly极大节约时间/金钱/劳动
- 2.m 3个
  - making our contributions to X 对…做贡献. x=环保 the environmental protection/国家 our country
  - making positive attributions to things 积极归因(个人品质)
  - making sth/sb more adj使某人/某事更加 adj
  - 例如:making our life more convenient 便捷
  - 例如:making other people more comfortable 舒适
- 3.i 1个
  - improving X 提高X
    - X=竞争力 our competitiveness
    - 效率 the study or work efficiency
    - 文化自信 our cultural confidence
    - 民族凝聚力 the national cohesion
    - 幸福感 our sense of happiness
    - 专注度 our concentration
- 4.l 3个
  - lowering consumption of resources 降低资源消耗
  - leaving a good impression on others 留下好印象
  - learning more things 学到更多东西
- 5.e 1个
  - enriching our spiritual life 丰富精神生活
- 6.b 3个
  - building a good social atmosphere/a harmonious society
  - broadening our horizons 开阔视野
  - bringing warmth/convenience to others/our life
- 7.a 1个
  - acquiring X获得X
  - x=前景 a better prospect both in career and life(个人)
  - =信任支持 support and trust from other people
  - =动力 more motivation
  - =先进知识 more advanced knowledge
- 8.r 3个
  - reducing CO2 emissions 减少碳排放
  - realizing a sustainable development 可持续发展/one’s potential 潜能
  - recovering from the adversity quickly 逆境恢复

背诵内容

第一段：1个框架
第二段：4个框架句
- 1、主题词(2选1) 2句
- 2、意义分析 smile bar 16个短语 1句
- 3、例句分析 8个例句 8句
- 4、研究发现 1句
第三段：个人评论 5句
*合计 17句+16smile bar短语（20分）

资料

大作文漫画真题、历年主题词、第一段练习范文、课后作业(一篇大作文)，都在cctalk
大作文完整时间：35分钟，字数200字，可以看讲义；

大作文-主题词预测(7个)

1、个人品质
- X spirit--X 精神
  - (1)工匠精神 craftsman`s spirit
  - (2)奉献精神 devoted spirit
  - (3)团队合作精神 teamwork spirit
- X thinking--X 思维
  - (1)创造性思维 creative thinking
  - (2)批判性思维 critical thinking
  - (3)独立性思维 independent thinking
- 耐心/欲速则不达
  - haste makes waste/patience.
  - 例如：The cartoon/excerpt has subtly revealed a meaning that haste makes waste
- 付出才有回报
  - It is impossible for us to reap(收获，主语后置了) without efforts.
- 机遇与挑战并存
  - Accepting the challenges and seizing the opportunities
- 写作思路
  - 意义分析：improve(有批判思维可以提高我们的)竞争力，acquire(获得好的)前景，realize(实现)潜能
  - 例证(3选1)：乔布斯、屠呦呦、苏炳添；
2、正面现象
- 团结一致/同舟共济 beinig united(使统一) as one.
- 无私奉献 selfless devotion
- 责任感 sense of responsibility
- 爱心 love
- 写作思路
  - 意义分析：build 氛围，leave 印象，acquire 信任/支持。都可以把上面的smile bar短语往上带；
  - 例证：白衣天使(武汉抗疫)
3、低碳环境
- 低碳生活 a low-carbon lifestyle
- 节约资源 saving resources
- 保持生态平衡 keeping ecological balance
- 写作思路
  - 意义分析：make 环保(给环保做贡献)，lower降低(降低资源消耗)，reduce排放(减少碳排放)，realize持续(实现可持续发展)。smile bar套上去；
  - 例证：新能源汽车
4、文化融合
- Cultural integration/cultural blending
- 写作思路
  - 意义分析：
    - reducing the conflicts between nations.
    - improving the mutual understanding and respect.
    - promoting the economic development of all countries.
  - 例证：用孔子的儒家思想
5、诚信/文明行为/社会公德
- 诚信 honesty 正直 integrity
- 社会功德 public morality
- 文明行为
- 写作思路
  - 意义分析：leave 印象，acquire 支持，build 社会氛围；
  - 例证：华盛顿 or 列宁让路
6、父母--子女关系
- 孝顺和尊敬父母：respecting and supporting our parents.
- 写作思路
  - 意义分析：leave 印象，acquire 支持，build 社会氛围；
  - 例证：子路借米
- 理解/尊重/做榜样：
  - making an example for children.
  - being respected by our parents(受到父母的尊重和理解).
- 写作思路
  - 意义分析：improve(提高)竞争力，acquire(获得好的)前景，realize(实现)潜能
  - 例句
    - First and foremost, from being respected and understood by our parents, we can benefit a lot, such as realizing our potentials,
    - acquiring a better prospect both in their career and life and improving their competitiveness.
  - 例证(2选1)：乔布斯、苏炳添；
  - 例句
    - Steve Jobs who was respected and understood by his parents after his withdraw from university, spent his life on packaging
    - the magic of computing into elegantly designed and easy-to-use products, redefined the cellphone industry and changed the way we see the world.
7、应对压力/心理健康
- 适度压力：appropriate pressure
- 合理应对压力：cope with stress reasonably
- 心理健康：mental health
- 写作思路
  - 意义分析：improve 效率/专注度，acquire 动力，realize(实现)潜能
  - 例证：苏炳添

中性话题--利弊分析

适用话题：短视频、直播、网购、手游等
- 手游 mobile games
- 网购 online shopping
- 偶像崇拜 idol worship
- 直播 livestreaming
背诵4句话
- 第一句：总论
  - Everything has two sides. 每件事情都有两面性。
- 第二句：利
  - On the one hand,from 主题词，we can benefit a lot, such as A,B and C, which would play an essential role in our personal growth.
  - 一方面，从主题词中，我们能够获益很多，比如A,B and C，这在个人成长过程中扮演重要角色；
  - A,B and C
    - relieve the pressure
    - relaxing ourselves
    - enrich our life
  - smile bar=8个短语
    - shortening the distance with others 缩短和其他人的距离
    - making their own life convenient 让他们自己的生活更加方便
    - improving the work or study efficiency 提高工作或者学习效率
    - learning more things 学到更多东西
    - enriching their life 丰富他们的生活
    - broadening their horizons 开阔他们的视野
    - acquiring unique experience 获得独特的体验
    - relieving the pressure 缓解压力
- 第3句：弊
  - On the other hand, if we are addicted to it, if we fail to focus on the online course, 主题词 will not only waste our time, money and energy but also have a negative effect on our work or study efficiency.
  - 另一方面，如果我们沉迷其中的话，主题词不仅会浪费我们的时间/金钱和精力，而且会对我们的工作和学习效率有负面影响。
- 第4句：建议
  - We should treat it in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence/distraction. // 我们应该以一个合理的方式对待它，并且避免沉迷/分心。

大纲变动应对策略(图表)

考的可能性很小
第一段：描述图表7句
- 一、动态图2句
  - 1.变量 1
    - From the chart, we can clearly see that great changes have taken place in the number/percentage of 变量1, increasing/decreasing from X to Y.
  - 2.变量 2
    - Meanwhile, a rise/decline was witnessed in the amount/proportion of 变量2, waving from X to Y.
- 二、静态图2句
  - 1.变量1+变量2
    - From the chart, we can clearly see that the percentages of 变量1 and 变量2 get the first and second largest share, occupying 比例 1 and 比例2.
  - 2.变量 3+变量 4 +变量 5
  - cctalk的文档上有

// 写作练习 1、背会模板第一段，图片下无文字1句不会。√ 第二段，第一句巧妙地揭示了社会现象不太会 √ 第三段，第二句3选1不太会。√

2、主题词个人品质(..精神、思维)

3、看看自己能写哪一些第一段的动名词或动词不定式：可以详细描述对象1。insisting on what we love，we should insist on our dreams. 考研、求职、出国、创业都是东名词开头 that引导的定语也可以进一步说明某个事或物定从： which is beneficial/essential to individual/personal growth which includes those difficult and innovative courses with new knowledge. // 用在第二个对象 which connects people and separates them from each other. which includes Kungfu, Movie, Curture and so on. // 只有一个对象用其它句子写法、so...that、两个简单句并列或表原因：and/because

4、三个例证分析主题词

不太熟：子路借米儒家思想支援武汉

selfless devoted spirit creative/critical thinking public morality // 社会公德 enjoying the process accepting the challenges and seizing the opportunities

from a good example of our parents sense of responsibility keeping ecological balance

promote the economic development integrity/integration appropriate pressure mental health

介词的9个方位前、后、中、旁边、周围 front behind middle beside around in(大部分) at(left/right) on(上方)

1、中性话题的1.5句 Everything has two sides, On the one hand, On the other hand, Last but not least.

作文 ​

大作文 ​

格式 ​

句型 ​

写作步骤 ​

其它句子写法 ​

背诵内容 ​

资料 ​

大作文-主题词预测(7个) ​

中性话题--利弊分析 ​

大纲变动 应对策略(图表) ​

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