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  • 主要

    • 邀请信(考过8次)
    • 推荐信(考过4次)
    • 告示(考过5次)
    • 建议信(考过6次)
    • 道歉信(考过2次)

  • 次要

    • 投诉信(考过1次)
    • 辞职信(考过1次)
    • 祝贺信(考过0.3次)
    • 感谢信(考过0.3次)
    • 告知信(考过2次)

  • 记住的模板

    • 邀请4句、推荐4句、建议4句、感谢2句、道歉3句、投诉3句、祝贺2句、告知1框架
    • 总计 30句 = 25句书信+5句告示

  • 书信格式(分成三个部分)

    • 一、称呼
      • 1.写给机构:Dear Sir or Madam,
      • 2.写给个人: Dear人名，
        • 题干有人名,直接抄Dear John,
        • 题干无人名/有身份,自己编Dear Tom/Jack,
      • 3.写给集体:Dear Classmates/Friends/Students,
    • 二、正文内容(写3个段落)
      • 第1段：自我介绍+写作目的1句
      • 第2段：不同书信类型单独讲解
      • 第3段：希望接受+期待回复2句
    • 三、落款
      • 1.客套：Yours sincerely,您真诚地，
      • 2.落款: Li Ming/Zhang Wei
      • 提示：1和2是左对齐

  • 邀请信

    • 第一段：自我介绍+写作目的1句
      • As
        • a student of our university,
        • the president of the Student Union,
        • a student/one who 定从,
      • I am writing this email/reply to invite you to
        • 1.attend 活动
        • 2.to be 身份 of 活动
        • 3.其他
    • 第二段：活动3句+被邀请人1句
      • 1、活动时间、地点/举办方
        • 活动 is to be held by our university 地点
          • 室内:at the auditorium
          • 室外:on the playground
          • 线上:at Ding talk
          • 校外:in a remote village
          • 活动：会议、演讲、比赛、慈善义卖都可以用；
        • at 7 a.m./p.m.on May 1st.
        • The international innovation contest is to be held by our university at the auditorium at 9 a.m on May 1st.
      • 2、活动目的
        • It aims to do A, to do B and to do C.（A/B/C换成smile bar3个短语）
          • s: to shorten the distance between students 拉近距离
          • m: to make their campus life more colorful 多姿多彩
          • i: to improve their confidence/love/sense of responsibility/creativity
          • l: to liberate their imagination 解放想象力
          • e: to enrich their campus life 丰富生活
          • b: to broaden their horizons 开阔视野
          • a: to arouse their interest for 唤起兴势
          • r: to relieve their pressure 缓解压力
      • 3、活动流程和内容
        • It includes a variety of parts, such as A, B and C.
          • 开幕 the opening session
          • 颁奖 the awarding part
          • 问答 the question and answering part
          • 致辞 the speech-delivering part
          • 晚宴 the dinner party
          • 感恩 the grateful education
      • 4、被邀请人
        • (1)长辈：You have enjoyed a great reputation in our university, so your coming will be our great honor.
        • (2)平辈：This is especially for you, so you will have a good time then.
    • 第三段: 希望接受+期待回复2句
      • 1.I really hope that you can accept my X.
        • X=邀请 invitation
        • 推荐 recommendation
        • 建议 suggestions
        • 投诉 complaint
        • 感谢 appreciation/gratitude
        • 道歉 apology
        • 请求 request
        • 询问 complaints
      • 2.I am looking forward to your early reply.

  • 推荐信

    • 第一段：自我介绍+写作目的1句
      • As
        • a student of our university,
        • the president of the Student Union,
        • a student/one who 定从,
      • I am writing this email/reply to recommend you 东西一名字
        • a song--Faded
        • a major--Clinical Medicine
        • a food--Peking Roast Duct
        • a person--Tom
      • 例如：As one who has watched more than 300 romantic movies, I am writing this letter to recommend you a film-Titanic.
    • 第二段：推荐理由4句(事物优点)
      • 1.总论 The reasons why I recommend this to you are as follows.
      • 2.原因1=从中获益 First and foremost, from推荐东西(n/doing), you can benefit a lot, such as A, B and C.(doing短语一smile bar大小作文)
      • 例如:
        • First and foremost, from watching this movie, you can benefit a lot, such as broadening your horizons,
        • enriching your life and arousing your interest in romantic relationship.
      • 3.原因2=有名 如此...以至于...
        • In addition, it is so
          • interesting
          • promising
          • beautiful
          • splendid
          • yummy、testy
        • 例如：it is quite famous, enjoying a great reputation in the world/in China/in our university.
      • 4.原因3=有意思 Last but not least, they are so adj that I never fail to be attracted to it,which leaves a deep impression on me.
    • 第三段: 希望接受+期待回复2句
      • 1.I really hope that you can accept my recommendation.
      • 2.I am looking forward to your early reply.

  • 建议信

    • 第一段：自我介绍+写作目的1句
      • As
        • a student of our university,
        • the president of the Student Union,
        • a student/one who 定从,
      • I am writing this email/reply to
        • 1.单纯推荐信: to make some useful suggestions about x
          • 名词
          • doing 短语
        • 2.混合建议信: to express my sincere gratitude/welcome/congratulations to you because/for 题干.
    • 第二段：提出建议4句
      • 1.总论（单纯建议信不需要这句） Here are some useful suggestions about x
        • 名词
        • doing 短语
      • 2.建议一：First and foremost it is necessary for you/机构 to 动词+名词1，三大从句=结果/目的/原因，水平不高用结果状语。
      • 3.建议二：In addition,you/机构 are/is supposed to 动词+名词2，三大从句=结果/目的/原因，水平不高用结果状语。
      • 4.建议三：Last but not least,名词3 should be 动词ed，三大从句=结果/目的/原因，用目的状语。
      • 补充三大从句(2-4的)：
        • 1、结果(定从)
          • (1)主干句, which would be beneficial to you.
          • (2)主干句, which would bring convenience to you/students.
        • 2、目的(状从)
          • 主干句，so that you/sb can do A, do B and do C.(smile bar短语)
          • so that = 以便
        • 3、原因(状从)
          • 主干句 because 原因状从.
      • 例子
        • 给图书馆的建议
          • 3.购买更多书-目的状语(smile bar)
          • 4.延长时间-结果状语
          • 5.优化预约系统-结果状语
        • First and foremost, it is necessary for the library to purchase more books so that students can broaden their horizons, liberate their imagination and enrich their campus life.
        • In addition, the library is supposed to prolong the opening time, which would bring convenience to tudents.
        • Last but not least, the booking system should be improved, which would be beneficial to students.

  • 告示

    • 1、标题 Notice 居中
    • 2、日期：月 日，年（位置=标题下一行右侧），例如 May 1st,2023
    • 3、正文(3段)
      • 第一段：通知目的
        • This notice is written to do 不定式(抄题干)
        • 例如：
          • This notice is written to inform the international students about the“Hope”singing competition.
          • it is quite famous, enjoying a great reputation in Our university.
      • 第二段：活动2句+人物优点3句
        • (1)总论: Several volunteers are needed for this activity.
        • (2)优1:性格 They should be warm-hearted, patient and energetic.
        • (3)优2:能力 In addition, they ought to have good communication skills and be proficient in English.
      • 第三段：联系方式+欢迎参加
        • (1) Those who are interested in being part of itcall 12345678 for further information.
        • (2) Come on and join us now!
    • 4、署名
      • (1) 题干有署名，直接抄(首字母大写)
      • (2) 题目无署名，The Student Union/XXX University

  • 道歉信

    • 第一段：自我介绍+写作目的1句
      • As
        • a student of our university,
        • the president of the Student Union,
        • a student/one who 定从,
      • I am writing this email/reply to express my sincere apology to you because/for 原因
      • 例如：
        • As a student who lived in your house,
        • I am writing this email to express my sincere apology to you because
        • I forgot to return to you the music CD of Jay chou.
    • 第二段：犯错原因+全面背锅+弥补办法
      • 1.犯错原因主
        • (1)粗心 The reason for my mistake was that I was so careless that I failed to do 不定式.
        • 例如：to check my luggage carefully.
        • (2)意外 The reason for my mistake was that I had to take an important exam.
        • (3)灵活 The reason for my mistake was that 表从.
      • 2.全面背锅
        • I take full responsibility for this fault, and I assure you that this won't happen again.
      • 3.弥补办法
        • To make up for my fault,主干句
          • 1.寄回去
          • 2.我给你钱
          • 3.买一个
          • 4.再回去
        • 例如：To make up for my fault, I will give it to you when I go back to Canada.
    • 第三段: 希望接受+期待回复2句
      • 1.I really hope that you can accept my apology.
      • 2.I am looking forward to your early reply.

  • 告知信

    • 也是书信的格式，只有第二段参照框架来写
      • 先把要写得翻译成英式汉语
        • 我睡觉早+目的从句
          • I go to bed at 11 p.m so that I can get up early.
        • 我洗澡每天+目的从句
          • I take a shower every day,which would enable me to have a good sleep.
        • 我喜欢做饭+结果从句
          • I live cooking,which would bring convenience to me.
      • 告知信-例子
      • 上面三句话用这些连起来
        • First and foremost
        • In addition
        • Last but not least
    • 主干句(五大基本句型)+从句
      • 1.结果
        • (1),which would be beneficial to sth/sb.
        • (2),which would bring convenience/threats to sth.
      • 2.目的
        • (1) so that I can do A, do B and do C.
        • (2),which would enable sb to do sth.
      • 3.原因 because 因为
      • 4.条件 if 如果
      • 5.时间 When 当

  • 感谢信

    • 第一段：自我介绍+写作目的1句
      • As
        • a student of our university,
        • the president of the Student Union,
        • a student/one who 定从,
      • I am writing this email/reply to express my sincere gratitude to you 原因
        • 1.句子 because
        • 2.短语 for
    • 第二段：感谢2句+其他要求1/2句
      • 1句: 反面，If I had not got your assistance, I fear that I might not have done(假设没有得到帮助的后果)。
      • 2句: 正面，However, with your help,主干句-受到帮助后的效果(I solved many problems).
      • 3句：Although nowadays many people talk about the need to be unselfish and to help others, we see that very few people practice(践行) what they preach(宣扬).
      • 4句：But you showed by your actions that you are an exception(例外)
      • 例如:
        • If I had not got your assistance, I fear that i might not have improved my spoken English and made more friends.
        • However, with your help, I understood the American culture, found a nice apartment and relieved my pressure.
        • 你同事在美国怎么帮你?
          • 1.提高 口语
          • 2.交到更多朋友
          • 3.了解美国文化
          • 4.找到 公寓
          • 5.适应 新环境
          • 6.缓解压力
        • 感谢信-例子
      • 3句：题干的其他要求
    • 第三段: 希望接受+期待回复2句
      • 1.I really hope that you can accept my invitation.
      • 2.I am looking forward to your early reply.

  • 其它书信

    • 第一段
      • 申请信
        • to apply for
          • 1.学校 an admission to a university
          • 2.工作 a job as X(求职信)
          • 3.奖学金 scholarship
          • 4.项目 a project
      • 询问信
        • to ask if you can give me some information/suggestions about...
      • 告知信
        • to tell you about X
        • 例子(辞职信)：to tell you about my decision to quit
      • 投诉信
        • to make a complaint about X(商品、服务)
      • 请求信
        • to ask if you could do...
    • 第二段
      • 人物优点（适用条件：题干需要描述人物优点）
        • 1、总论：
          • I have all the qualifications(条件) that are required.
        • 2、性格能力：
          • 1、I am confident,optimistic and creative, and most importantly I have strong communication skills/teamwork spirit/leadership.
        • 3、成绩好
          • In the past 4/3/2 years, I have maintained an average score of 90 and proved myself to be a straight-A student.
        • 4、工作/实践 经验
          • I have been working as 职位/身份, and I have attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field.
      • 询问信
        • First and foremost, can you tell me when/where/why/how 问题1？
        • In addition, I would also like to inquire 问题2.
        • Another aspect I am concerned about is 问题3.
      • 产品服务（适用条件：投诉具体的商品 or 抽象服务）
        • 1、总论：The factors for my disappointment can be listed as follows
        • 2、产品：Firstly, the screen/light/keyboard/TV(in your hotel) worked in the first day, but later showed some obvious problems.
        • 3、售后：I strongly demand that you should compensate for my loss/compensate for 弥补.
      • 祝贺信
        • 1、Your own intelligence and diligence have earned you this achievement.
        • 2、I can well imagine that your parents are so proud of you now and anxiously hope to witness your brilliant success.
        • 3、It is really encouraging for me to see your efforts rewarded(回报).

  • 其它格式

    • 告示(通知)
      • 1、标题：Notice 居中/首字母大写
      • 2、日期：月 日，年(位置在标题下一行的右侧)，例如---May 1st,2023 // 4号以后是跟4th，3是3rd
      • 3、正文(3段)
        • 第一段：通知目的
          • This notice is written to do 不定式.(题干寻找)
          • 例如：This notice is written to introduce the "Hope" singing competition that is quite famous, enjoying great reputation in our university.
        • 第二段：活动3句+志愿者2句(5挑4)
          • pre：活动时间、地点/举办方、活动目的(smile bar)
          • 1、Several volunteers are needed for this activity.
          • 2、They should be patient, energetic and warm-hearted, and most importantly they ought to have strong communication skills and good teamwork spirit.
          • 擅长口语，be proficient in spoken English
        • 第三段：联系方式+欢迎参加
          • 1、Those who are interested in being part of it call 123456 for further information.
          • 2、Come on and join us now!
      • 4、署名
        • 1、题干有署名，直接抄写
        • 2、题干无署名，XXX University
    • 纪要
      • 1、定义：正式地纪要“某会议、活动、演讲”要点文字
      • 2、纪要包括：主题+时间+地点+出席者+3个要点信息
      • 3、模板（斯大林劈腿）
        • Subject: A charity sale
        • Date: May 1st, 2023
        • Location: No.3 Meeting Hall
        • Present: Ms.Alice--Prisident, Mr.Bob--Wice President
        • The minutes are follows:
          • 1、要点 1=会议流程
          • 1、要点 2=会议目的
          • 1、要点 3=自由发挥
    • 备忘录(momo/report)
      • To: 给谁的(题干有)
      • From: 谁写的(题干有)
      • Date: 日期 May 1st, 2023
      • Subject: 主题(题干有)
        • 第1段：This momo is written to do...
        • 第2段：题干要求
        • 第3段：I really hope that you can...
        • 正文无需顶格写，需要空格！

建议信练习(重点)

Dear Junler As a local student, I am writing this letter to express my views that "White pollution" is still going on. Here are some useful suggestions about the restriction on the use of plastic bags. First and foremost, it is necessary for the government to raise the price of plastic bags, which would be beneficial to government protection. In addition the government should make related laws and regulations so that people can imporve their awareness of environmential protection. Last but not least, more alternative products, such as paper bags should be produced so that people can have more choices. I really hope that you can accept my suggestions. I am looking forword to your early reply. Yours sincerely Li Ming

申请信(练习)

Dear Sir or Madam As a student form China, I am writing this email to apply for an admission to your university. It is quite famous, enjoying a great reputation in the world. I have all the qualifications that are required, First and foremost, I can confident, optimistic and creative, and most importantly I have strong academic ability, In addition, in the past 4 years, I have maintained an average score of 90 and proved myself to be a straight-A student.
I really hope that you can accept my application. I am looking forword to your early reply. Yours sincerely Li Ming // 第一句的这个定语要练习，who is filled with respect for you university // 人物优点的3句话； // 每周练习三篇即可。活动的3句

道歉信(练习)

Dear Bob As a student who received a lot of help from you, I am writing this letter to express my sincere apology to you because I forgot to return the music CD to you. The reason for my mistake was that I was so careless That failed to check my luggage carefully. I take full responsibility and I assure you that this won t happen again. To make up for my fault, you can buy b new one in Canada and I will pay for it. I really hope that you can accept my apology. I am looking forword to your early reply. Yours sincerely Li Ming

告示(练习，不重要) Notice May 1st, 2023 This notice is written to introduce the “Hope” singing competition for international students that is quite famous, enjoying a great reputation in our university. The contest is to be held by our university on the playground at 7 p.m. on June 1st. It aims to enrich international students' campus life, to shorten the distance between students and to relieve their pressure. Several volunteers are needed for this activity. They should be patient, energetic and warm-hearted, and most importantly, they ought to be proficient in spoken English. Those who are interested in being part of it call 12345678 for further information. Come on and join us now! The Student Union

会议纪要(练习，不重要)

Subject: A charity sale Date: May 1st,2023 Location: No.3 Meeting Hall Present: Ms.Alice-President, Mr.Bob-Vice President The minutes are as follows: 1.The meeting includes a variety of processes, such as the speech- delivering, the question and answering part and so on.

2.The “Hope”charity sale aims to improve their love, to enrich students' campus life and to enhance their social responsibilities.

3.Several volunteers are needed for this activity. They should be patient, energetic and warm-hearted, and most importantly, they ought to have great communication skills.

4.The charity sale is to be held by our university on the playground at 8 a.m. On May 5th.

备忘录(练习，不重要)

To: Club members From: Li Ming Date: May 1st, 2023 Subject: Creating Green Culture and Building Low-Carbon Campus This memo is written to introduce some activities about the environment protection. These activities are to be held by our university on the playground at 8 a.m. on May 5th. These activities aim to enrich students' campus life, to improve their awareness of environment protection and to create a low-carbon lifestyle. Several volunteers are needed for this activities. They should be patient, energetic and warm-hearted, and most importantly they ought to have great teamwork spirit. Those who are interested in being part of it call 12345678 for further information. Come on and join us now!

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